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Joel Brigham (Brigham Editorial)
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P8 – The first line had me worried, but the rest of the opening paragraph was fantastic. In fact, my editor brain hummed throughout these pages with ways to make the most of this scene. It’s good, but it needs more tension. I also think we could milk more mystery and suspense out of this.
2025-03-30T15:51:16.757Z